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[A Tails Doll Halloween]

Nice movie on the Tails Doll story.

Personally, I was going to do a similar thing with the Tails Doll for Halloween, but I didn't have any time to work on it, so I just postponed it to next year.

As for this flash, it was drawn nicely, simple yet entertaining plot, and at least follows the "legend". 4/5 Keep it up.

To HibiscusKazeneko, the Tails Doll does come out, but not always through a TV. Now I'm not 100% on this but the story says that the last thing you'll see is him because he'll kills him, but it doesn't specifically say where. Also the story says that staring directly into his eyes long enough, he'll steal and eat your soul.

The whole story is really just for laughs, but still somewhat funny to the people who get the joke.

Stasis-Designs responds:

Thanks, gameboyplayer. I too had Tails Doll in mind for a Flash movie for a long time, but again, time is an issue. I had similar scenes in another Flash movie I had started making, so I re-drew them all and made it it's own little movie. I think it's good for a first :)

Yeah, the story is just for laughs like you say. It's stupid to believe but funny. Tails Doll has become a very popular character because of his "killings"....

[Mario And Friends Goof Up]

You need some work....seriously

You'rer lucky I'm a light user or I would bash this movie to the grounds, but it's not crappy.

The movie was less than average, but not horrible. Could use more sound effects, better sprites, and something else that I can't think of. Anyway, get some more experience with flash and try again. Everyone starts off somewhere(and no, I haven't watch pt.2 yet).

Oh, and for people who are wondering why this is on the frontpage? Visit the forums more often or google "BBS: Tom please frontpage this movie". That should explain everything.

2/5

[Sonics Downfall Part 1]

Good for a start, could use SFX

A good start for a beginner, good luck with your series. Now then, let's talk about the pro's and con's:

[Pro's]
-Nice useage of sprites
-sound didn't sound choppy
-story was alright, now too bad.

[Con's]
-could use SFX for more effect
-some text boxes took too long

Overall a 3/5.

As for frame rate, I personally recommend 18 FPS. It's not very fast, nor very slow, and a good speed for novices. Anyway, good luck

[A Kitty Krew Beatdown]

Am I seeing true?

Wow. Just seeing something that either supporing/from the kitty krew being that awesome, it made me wonder if they will actually made stuff like this or at least something that's not spam.

Normally, I give this a 4/5 at least, but it supports kitty krew. Just that, I have to give it a 0/5.

Sorry dude, it's not your fault, it's the kitty krew's. Keep up the good work though.

0/5

[Sonic:The Dark Side Prt 1]

"the BG messed it up, but everything else is ok"

For a first time, it a-ok. Personally, it's sort of similar to my lastest flash, but that's my opinion. The stretched backgrounds just didn't look right. Also, Metal Sonic hardly talks in the Sonic games, unless your talking about Sonic Heroes. I expected him to act more independent, like Bass is to Dr. Wily. Besides that, it's short and sweet.

Anyway, good luck if this becomes a series.

4/5

[rocklee vs sasuke]

ok, could use some more work

All I have to say is ok start. The sprites weren't animating smoothly and you could've just remove the blue part of the stage. Besides that, it's ok for a start. Not really interested into a Naruto sprite series, but that's my opinion. Anyways good luck in the future.

3/5

thedo12 responds:

thanks' I will probaly revise this add sound effects stuff like that

[Mario Mania]

You did good, but you can do better.

For a beginner, you did good. Your movie had sound, but it lack sound effects and some good violence. But besides that, it was a fairly good movie. keep it up.

Glunnator responds:

Violence doesn't make the movie.
This sucked anyway, though, and I don't mind admitting it. That 6 of yours is mighty generous :D